Friday, 20 February 2015

Coursework feedback


Appropriate institutional title for Warner Brothers at the start and then a title using colour and appropriate font .  A production company  logo could be added. Ambient sound of birdsong is added to create an atmosphere of suburbia and a range of shots demonstrate continuity editing. As the edit builds through a range of shots of the detective walking the voice-over establishes the narrative in the convention of film noir. The voice-over sets up the enigma and a close up then reveals his state of mind.  Transitions are used well such as a fade to black to indicate the end of the introduction. 

The next scene is in a bar and shows proficiency in scripting and storyboarding and organizing actors, settings and props.  Careful attention is given to filming a range of shots. Music enhances meaning further and codes and conventions of the genre are clearly followed. The enigma is then set up with the femme fatale raising the issue which will then drive the narrative.

Evidence of proficiency in most of the skills and clearly fulfills the task.

45/60

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